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"Seek out a hill crest, my sister. There lie down, face-up, and gaze at the sky now far below you. See how deep it is? Such is my love for Solomon." — Tehtena, in a letter to Makeda which was never sent out.

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"Two wrongs don't make a right...but three lefts do. Try it—you'll see." — Tobiel, the carpenter

A bit of self-reflection

I am not a handsome man — please do not draw back my curtain of beautiful words.

I shortened the line I posted last July—it still says it all, I think.

"When a pretty young woman walked by, I saw in the old man's eyes that time inflicted more wounds than it healed." — Queen Makeda's Sister

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Sooner or later the time will come when I might need a beta reader to look over my novel. I have never tried that sort of thing on a large scale, but experiences with acquaintances and friends to whom I had given some of my writings are enough to make me believe that it would perhaps be wiser to actually pay strangers to read my work. Not only will the later be less concerned with hurting my feelings, they will also be more likely to take their task serious. All too often have I seen friends acting all excited and flattered when I gave them my manuscript, only to find out later that they merely read a few pages and then forgot about the rest. That kind of hurtful insincerity can actually harm a friendship. It seems far safer to me, therefore, to entrust people other than friends and family with such a job. What experiences, if any, have you had with beta readers? 

"Do not harden your heart for fear of pain. Love does not tread where it cannot leave its footprints." — Tehtena, Queen Makeda's Sister

A line from 'The Response'

"'Air On the G String' is a famous piece of music by Johann Sebastian Bach and not what happens when a woman eats too many beans and then wears a skimpy bikini. "  — the pianist André De La Lemieux in my novel 'The Response'